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3...2...1...go!It's Friday, so what better than a little challenge to get you moving in to the weekend.I'd like you to share the following;3 deviations this week that you think deserve more attention in the community2 deviations that I should comment on (you can suggest your own work!)1 deviant that you added to your watchlist this week.
We're Not the Ringlings--C.Please, please say you’ll never let me go.We’re performers (not sure if that’s good though),Swinging high, flying low,Dancing around, static love.Double-talking with multiple meanings in one language.On the trapeze of a d a n g l i
.everything i hold deari hold too tightly;i am so sorry you weremarked when i had tolet you go
feed me briar patch kissesYou plucked me ripe from the vinea summer blackberry,so roll me soft between your fingerssqueeze me till I burst.I'll stain your palmsand everyone will know you're mine.
friday night.on our firstdate,you took me to a cemeteryjust outside of town.i guess you wanted toshow mewhat you would do to me.
.in the nighttime you arebetter; moonlightembroiders yourskin and stitchesyou up with apurer love, untilthe morning comes,the sun runs histeeth through yourseams again, splitsyou open
a beast is bornLucifer wove my sins into horns.
Letter In My HeartAll these years I wanted love to find meWith precious love songs and girlish dreamsIt seemed like a horizon awayBut it never cameThen I opened my heart and found a letter insideA carnation of red and True Love in the linesI found myself filled with gentle blissThe letter read something like this"I fell in love with the thought of youThat's what made me want to create youAnd I gave you mirrors along the waySo you could see the truth when I sayI love you, precious child, this is trueAt the next mirror, whisper I Love YouThis is my love, From Father to you"I had looked away so long I forgotThat this kind of love was right here in my heartNow I invite you to seek love under your skinThis kind of love is in you, it comes from within
KeroseneSmother me in roses; not kerosene.I want to die beautiful.
I Am In AweI am in awe.Of the way the wind carries a leaf,Of the uniqueness of a snowflake,And of the tenderness of a kiss.I am in aweOf the beauty of wordsOf art, of family,And the way music reaches the soul.I am in awe of many things.I am in awe ofThe double entendreOf words, of smiles,And of tears.I am in awe ofThe laughter,The emotion,The existenceOf an infant,A child, a teenager,Of a woman,And of a grown man.I am in aweOf the beauty that surrounds me,The way a smileWarms a cold room,And a friendTakes away the pain.I am in awe of the strengthOf a mother’s love,Of a warm embrace,And of that four letter word.I am in aweOf the warmth of the sun,The thorns on a rose,And the passion of the fire.I am in aweOf the ground below,The mountains above,And the starsIn the darknessFar beyond.I am in aweOf the innocence of a child,And of how quicklyIt can be taken away.I am in aweOf the stupidity of man,The elegance of a tiger,And the brilliance of a sto
ColorblindCan I be beautiful?I'm no girl in a magazineIt's a standardA worship to societyConfidence and security, that is all I really needBut when will I be beautiful to me?[Chorus]Colorblind, yet coloring between the linesNo matter what I tryI can't seem to get it rightIs it a lie?Can I be so beautiful on the insideThat it would never matterIf I had an outside at allCan I be wonderful?I'm in a room of mirrorsI don't recognizeMyself and it fills me with terrorConfidence and security, that is all I really needBut when will I be beautiful to me?[Chorus]Colorblind, yet coloring between the linesNo matter what I tryI can't seem to get it rightIs it a lie?Can I be so beautiful on the insideThat it would never matterIf I had an outside at allI'mI'm one of a kindAnd II was designedDesigned by Christ to be His receiverOne of a kind I want to be His believerI need a cure will You be my healer?Designed by Christ to be His receiverOne of a kind will you be a believer?H
DesperationI don't want to be bossI can't handle itPlease help me find my restDon't let my love or hope for you dry outI want to walk in your loveI want reassuranceI know the gift is free, because you, beautiful Lord,Ruler of all, give and take awayI can't save myself, not of this world or even of me, myselfForgiveness because you were slainNo, I won't let it be vainPlease, don't cast me from your presenceMy sorrows for my wrongs are greatPlease help me dieHelp me serve, protecting your namePlease take my burdens and guard me with loveHelp me surrender and be consumed in fireChastise me and reproof me when I fall short, but never let me goI seek forever in your armsI know your humble, your tender kisses, loving arms ready to embrace and gentle handsI know your mercy and gracious heartPlease break me and remake meTake me in your heartPlease never look away, for though I've sinnedMy love is greater, your love is greaterI wish to live as you haveWhatever it takes Lord, fore
Tales of Woe, I Finally Now Know.Led astray and too blind to see.Oh, Lord, may you give them mercy.Doing all one could do, that is enough.Then it is time, to brush my feet of the rough.Fearful, I tremble in your presence.No greater than they, know my heart isn't menace.Praying with humble tears, for now I know.That only through you, love, may grace even flow.All will be used to bring you glory.Yes, even the wicked, who'll tremble in your story.Finally when you reign & all comes to an end;Your bride shall exalt you, more than a friend.
Psalm 103: Personal InterpretionBless the LORD, O my soul.Let all that is within me, bless His Holy Name.He forgives my sins.He redeems my life.He covers me with His love.As high as the heavens are above the earth, so great is his mercy.Bless the LORD, you angels.Bless the LORD, your heavenly hosts.Bless the LORD, all creation.Bless the LORD, O my soul!Let all that is within me, bless His Holy Name!
Female Haudenosaunee (Iroquois) NamesAdsila BlossomCaneadea Where the heavens rest upon the earthDehhewämis Pretty girl, Handsome girl, Pleasant, good thing.Genesee Beautiful valleyGennisheyo Shining, Beautiful valley Jigonhsasee New faceKateri PureOheo BeautifulOniatario Sparkling, Beautiful water, Fine lakeOrenda Magic powerTalise Beautiful waters, ForestTekakwitha One who walks groping for her way
.wishing your traffic light mindwould break down& give in becausemy lungs have gone blackfrom smoking this insanityfor far too long just tomake you love all of me.
One plus one - NaPo 1She said she tried to walk awayTo find a path less troubledBut then she took his hand againAnd found it all had doubled