3...2...1...go!It's Friday, so what better than a little challenge to get you moving in to the weekend.I'd like you to share the following;3 deviations this week that you think deserve more attention in the community2 deviations that I should comment on (you can suggest your own work!)1 deviant that you added to your watchlist this week.
every night my hair is falling outI have heard that in 7 yearsevery cell in your bodyis new& isn't it beautiful that it will bea body you have never touchedbut I know that when your brain cellsdiefall like ashes through your skullthey stay dead& I can never scrap the memories out of their corpses
Before I Can Become a WriterWalk as a stranger in the crowd,dyed with my loneliness to clashwith their coordinating scheme.Watch life from stained glass windows,listen to mocking whispers amplified bymy own megaphone mind.Suffer betrayal. Suffer pain.Cry. Yearn for acceptance, become a cloneand watch as nothing changes.Face my own treachery’s unfeeling sting.Escape.Find hope. (Despair again in minutes.)Find happiness. (The moment never lasts.)Find old familiar faces. (Watch as they turn away.)Succumb to anger. Scream. Smash dishes.Speak and hate it. Hate myself. Feel ragefor clumsy sounds and rude alliteration,phrases that won’t behave, that still emergemisshapen, warped beyond belief.Stop talking. Watch.Stop watching. Listen.Burst with impatience, shout,then shrink. Repeat.Struggle with brittle words.Clench them with my blue-veined fists,white knuckles straining to mold chinalike soft clay. Watch as it shatters.Bully the signs and phrases into tidy line breaks;try to coax
friday night.on our firstdate,you took me to a cemeteryjust outside of town.i guess you wanted toshow mewhat you would do to me.
.in the nighttime you arebetter; moonlightembroiders yourskin and stitchesyou up with apurer love, untilthe morning comes,the sun runs histeeth through yourseams again, splitsyou open
a beast is bornLucifer wove my sins into horns.
Letter In My HeartAll these years I wanted love to find meWith precious love songs and girlish dreamsIt seemed like a horizon awayBut it never cameThen I opened my heart and found a letter insideA carnation of red and True Love in the linesI found myself filled with gentle blissThe letter read something like this"I fell in love with the thought of youThat's what made me want to create youAnd I gave you mirrors along the waySo you could see the truth when I sayI love you, precious child, this is trueAt the next mirror, whisper I Love YouThis is my love, From Father to you"I had looked away so long I forgotThat this kind of love was right here in my heartNow I invite you to seek love under your skinThis kind of love is in you, it comes from within
ColorblindCan I be beautiful?I'm no girl in a magazineIt's a standardA worship to societyConfidence and security, that is all I really needBut when will I be beautiful to me?[Chorus]Colorblind, yet coloring between the linesNo matter what I tryI can't seem to get it rightIs it a lie?Can I be so beautiful on the insideThat it would never matterIf I had an outside at allCan I be wonderful?I'm in a room of mirrorsI don't recognizeMyself and it fills me with terrorConfidence and security, that is all I really needBut when will I be beautiful to me?[Chorus]Colorblind, yet coloring between the linesNo matter what I tryI can't seem to get it rightIs it a lie?Can I be so beautiful on the insideThat it would never matterIf I had an outside at allI'mI'm one of a kindAnd II was designedDesigned by Christ to be His receiverOne of a kind I want to be His believerI need a cure will You be my healer?Designed by Christ to be His receiverOne of a kind will you be a believer?H
The Hope That Kept Me AliveI thought you were here,I thought you would stay by my side,But It wasn't real,Now I know I can't hide,It was just an illusion I've created,My own happy world, far away from the dark.When the truth was right in front of me,I lied to myself telling "this can't be".I closed my eyes and wished for better,I wiped my tears realizing this will come true somewhere near to never
But at the end of the dark tunnel, I've seen a light,It was a drop of hope,The hope that kept me alive.Dream on,Hanging by the thread of hope,I've figured out that you're so gone.Were you even there?All this time I've been alone,Holding on by a shadow,Feeding with memories,In a world of hollow.I am just a fool, I keep the memory of you alive,Hiding from the crowd, they'll never understand,But in the end I think I'll survive,Or is this another illusion?Another light?The hope that kept me alive
Is this love?Do you believe in soulmates;a convoluted question of fatethat unbeknownst to manyis right in front of them.That any meager attempt at love,although gratifying and well-meaning,is still a superfluous accomplishment,a feeble attempt at intemperance.Do you believe in love at first sight;an instantaneous relationshipbetween their eyes, love locked,their irises pulsating like their hearts.That incidence of recognition,an impossible, however improbableinstance of fate that befalls youthat encompasses you and your verve.Do you believe in this;this simple question of destinythat for so many is so paramount,is so vital and fundamental.To them it is like breathing,for them it is like dying,but it is nothing but living,taking the time to live and die.Do you believe in life;the one you subsist on now,for there is no reason for livingif not for a belief in something Someone to hold ontoin our thoughts and in our minds,this someone is the
DesperationI don't want to be bossI can't handle itPlease help me find my restDon't let my love or hope for you dry outI want to walk in your loveI want reassuranceI know the gift is free, because you, beautiful Lord,Ruler of all, give and take awayI can't save myself, not of this world or even of me, myselfForgiveness because you were slainNo, I won't let it be vainPlease, don't cast me from your presenceMy sorrows for my wrongs are greatPlease help me dieHelp me serve, protecting your namePlease take my burdens and guard me with loveHelp me surrender and be consumed in fireChastise me and reproof me when I fall short, but never let me goI seek forever in your armsI know your humble, your tender kisses, loving arms ready to embrace and gentle handsI know your mercy and gracious heartPlease break me and remake meTake me in your heartPlease never look away, for though I've sinnedMy love is greater, your love is greaterI wish to live as you haveWhatever it takes Lord, fore
FrostbiteYour eyes are frozen,Your fingers are ice.Your kiss gives me frostbite,Your words give it twice.
One plus one - NaPo 1She said she tried to walk awayTo find a path less troubledBut then she took his hand againAnd found it all had doubled
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